I liked #16 the best because they put up really good points no one else did like chocolate milk back in the vending machine and getting rid of the cops out of our parking lot. Everyone else pretty much put the same stuff like open campus lunch and better lunch. Plus I also like the idea of having more time in between classes.
I really like #19 because it was very relatable to me and the arguments make most sense and are doable.
I really like #16 it has basically everything this school needs for the future high school students. I really like the idea of having more time in between classes that would be great.
i really liked #18 it had a lot of good arguments and got the point across.
My favorite was #19 because all of the points were reasonable and not too far fetched. I related to almost every point in their declaration.
20 - Self-degrading thing is written out badly. Would be better
19 - This one is the best, the language is really good.
Number 17 is my favorite because it's the most extreme of the bunch. The others follow a similar path that progressively gets more boring as you go. 17 differed most from the pack, and gets my vote.
I like 17 it gives the best topics and the way to solve them it gets my vote.
I thought #17 was the best because it had points that others hadn't brought up along with good explanations.
My favorite was number 19 because it had some very good points and examples to beck them up.
My favorite Declaration was #18 because the writer used many good examples and gave points for everyone to relate to and not just the teens.
I liked 16 because they had some really good points like having more time in between class periods and I would also rather have chocolate milk in the vending machines instead of juice.
I thought number 19 was the best because it gave good and clear points. For example when giving the reason school should start later, they didn't just give their opinion, they gave factual information. Stating your opinion definitely helps but by giving facts along with their opinion, it makes the reader feel more persuaded.
I liked 19 the best because it made many good points and backed them up well. I could relate to most of their points and all of them make sense.
I think that #17 had good points and supporting information. For example, in one of their points they say how some families struggle to afford things like car insurance. Their solution was that if we are a good worker we can get a review from our boss, and potentially lower the cost of our car insurance. It was examples like these that helped me pick this Student Declaration as my favorite.