2014 English 11 Classes
Of this group I thought #20 was the most well-written, thoughtful, grammatically correct, and realistic. The expectations weren't outrageous like the others, and they had good reasoning.
#18 was hideous, #19 was a bit too unreasonable, and all the others tended to talk about the same points. Out of those remaining, I thought that #16 got the point across in the best way. Number 16 gave more explanation to their choices.
I like 17 because it's more of a call to action rather than a request.
I thought Teen Declaration 19 of this group was best written. Although the requests are very unrealistic, it is the best written out of this group. It has few grammatical errors and gets to the point quickly.
I thought Declaration 20 was the best in this group. It was the most realistic.
After reading through all the papers, I must conclude that 19 was the best overall. They gave excuses that are most commonly reject, though they may be true reasons as to why you were absent/tardy. Being this 19 was by far the best.
In my eyes i personally liked #16 due to the way it explained all of the things wee should have, and they were all reachable.
i picked this one because i want to go home during win and lunch rather than sit in the commens doing nothing and maybe i want a sub for lunch not 2 pecies of bread with ham on it
Number 17 was good because they give great points c:
i picked 19 because it gets me and what i want
#20 because it was well written
I really liked number 17 because of the points that they made.
Number 20 is well written few errors.
19 was the best for this group for the way it list its demands and how it states them .
#18 pretty good written.
#19. It's the best for a lot of reasons but the best one was that they demanded less homework on game nights. That's why I don't like math classes, because they really don't care what you do or who you are as long as you finish your homework. But what about the people who have to work or play sports and can't afford any time to finish homework. So I think the school should tone down the math homework in general to like homework on 2-3 of the days instead of all.
#20 was understandable and they got their point across without being unrealistic.
I think that #20 is the best because their ideas are realistic and clear. They did a good job explaining and persuading the audience.
#17 was worded very well, and immediately won my vote. The sophistication that they wrote with made me want their requests granted even if I didn't agree with all of them.
I would have to pick 19 because I agree on all the things that person is wanting to change.
I think overall that #16 used great grammar, and really just did great with making it sound very formal.
I personally thought #20 was the best. It had well stated ideas and got rite to the point. I also preferred the way it was formatted.
I really like 17 because it uses such strong words such as "We Demand". It makes the declaration very strong, and powerful to someone reading it.
I really enjoyed declaration #16, I felt I agreed with a lot with what it had said, had plenty of grammar, and stated its fact and/or opinion quite well.
Please read an assigned group of teen declarations. When you are done, leave a comment in which you identify your favorite declaration, providing a reason why it is the best.