Teen Declaration 16
Teen Declaration 17
Teen Declaration 18
Teen Declaration 19
Teen Declaration 20
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Click the links to read each Teen Declaration. Once you have read each declaration in the group, comment, identifying which is your favorite and WHY you like it best.
Teen Declaration 16 Teen Declaration 17 Teen Declaration 18 Teen Declaration 19 Teen Declaration 20
24 Comments
Elizabeth
12/8/2014 10:26:28 pm
Of this group I thought #20 was the most well-written, thoughtful, grammatically correct, and realistic. The expectations weren't outrageous like the others, and they had good reasoning.
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Jared Fogarty
12/8/2014 10:32:18 pm
#18 was hideous, #19 was a bit too unreasonable, and all the others tended to talk about the same points. Out of those remaining, I thought that #16 got the point across in the best way. Number 16 gave more explanation to their choices.
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Nate
12/8/2014 10:35:10 pm
I like 17 because it's more of a call to action rather than a request.
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Sara King
12/8/2014 10:36:07 pm
I thought Teen Declaration 19 of this group was best written. Although the requests are very unrealistic, it is the best written out of this group. It has few grammatical errors and gets to the point quickly.
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Alison Von Haden
12/8/2014 10:46:23 pm
I thought Declaration 20 was the best in this group. It was the most realistic.
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Hideki Ryuga
12/9/2014 12:53:28 am
After reading through all the papers, I must conclude that 19 was the best overall. They gave excuses that are most commonly reject, though they may be true reasons as to why you were absent/tardy. Being this 19 was by far the best.
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Allora Windsor
12/9/2014 12:56:46 am
In my eyes i personally liked #16 due to the way it explained all of the things wee should have, and they were all reachable.
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Dylan Bune
12/9/2014 12:57:32 am
i picked this one because i want to go home during win and lunch rather than sit in the commens doing nothing and maybe i want a sub for lunch not 2 pecies of bread with ham on it
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Morgan
12/9/2014 12:59:52 am
Number 17 was good because they give great points c:
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Dylan Bune
12/9/2014 01:00:22 am
i picked 19 because it gets me and what i want
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Savanna Klinger
12/9/2014 01:21:32 am
#20 because it was well written
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Grace Larson
12/9/2014 04:09:28 am
I really liked number 17 because of the points that they made.
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Tatum Huntress
12/9/2014 04:11:07 am
Number 20 is well written few errors.
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Aaron Schneider
12/9/2014 04:22:16 am
19 was the best for this group for the way it list its demands and how it states them .
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Ally Lee
12/9/2014 04:23:04 am
#18 pretty good written.
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Brett Fogarty
12/9/2014 04:25:18 am
#19. It's the best for a lot of reasons but the best one was that they demanded less homework on game nights. That's why I don't like math classes, because they really don't care what you do or who you are as long as you finish your homework. But what about the people who have to work or play sports and can't afford any time to finish homework. So I think the school should tone down the math homework in general to like homework on 2-3 of the days instead of all.
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Sam Green
12/9/2014 11:19:43 pm
#20 was understandable and they got their point across without being unrealistic.
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Maria Nygren
12/9/2014 11:24:21 pm
I think that #20 is the best because their ideas are realistic and clear. They did a good job explaining and persuading the audience.
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An Honest Opinion
12/9/2014 11:25:02 pm
#17 was worded very well, and immediately won my vote. The sophistication that they wrote with made me want their requests granted even if I didn't agree with all of them.
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Cole Flick
12/11/2014 11:33:00 pm
I would have to pick 19 because I agree on all the things that person is wanting to change.
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Jack Walkky
12/12/2014 12:54:13 am
I think overall that #16 used great grammar, and really just did great with making it sound very formal.
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Sierra Randen
12/12/2014 12:55:08 am
I personally thought #20 was the best. It had well stated ideas and got rite to the point. I also preferred the way it was formatted.
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Aidan
12/12/2014 01:06:38 am
I really like 17 because it uses such strong words such as "We Demand". It makes the declaration very strong, and powerful to someone reading it.
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Naomi Thatcher
12/12/2014 04:14:51 am
I really enjoyed declaration #16, I felt I agreed with a lot with what it had said, had plenty of grammar, and stated its fact and/or opinion quite well.
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