Teen Declaration #47
Teen Declaration #48
Teen Declaration #49
Teen Declaration #50
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Teen Declaration #46
Teen Declaration #47 Teen Declaration #48 Teen Declaration #49 Teen Declaration #50
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Dakota Brooke
10/18/2018 09:49:02 am
Out of the two options of #46 and #47 number 47 would be my favorite. This declaration had a good introduction paragraph and gave good support evidence to each point. They also had good spelling and grammar.
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Carter Merth
10/18/2018 10:05:23 am
#47 is defiantly my favorite Teen Declaration of the two. It had a very well written introduction and made some really good points. #46 needs some better grammar and punctuation.
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Santana Schlegel
10/18/2018 10:05:50 am
I like declaration 47 more than 46 because 47 is someone that knows what they want and they want it a certain way. But 46 is giving off the impression that they are whining more than anything and not really stating declarations.
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Dakota Donath
10/18/2018 10:08:38 am
I think out of the two Declarations I would have to choose 47 because the person did a very nice job on staying on point and not going off on on some other topic.
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Emma Garay
10/18/2018 10:16:27 am
Out of the two number 47 is for sure my favorite. They had such a great preamble to open with. They did have good points, but could have explained them more. Both of the declarations could have explained their points better though.
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Maddie Jacobson
10/18/2018 12:23:09 pm
Declaration number 48 was my favorite. They had well structured paragraphs as well as clear points. They also made their changes and why it should be changed very clear.
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Tati
10/18/2018 12:29:10 pm
#46 THERE THEIR AND THEY'RE FIX IT!!! NO!!
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Ben Anderson
10/19/2018 09:40:29 am
I found 47 better over the two. It had a well written introduction then seemed to get rushed towards the end.
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Shye Klatt
10/19/2018 09:53:07 am
#47 was the best out of the two because they had great diction and explained their reasoning's well
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Luke Deppa
10/19/2018 10:14:18 am
#47 takes it on this one well written and has gooder grammar the #46. the interdiction on 47 was very good also.
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Bella Marson
10/29/2018 07:30:32 am
I think that #49 was one of the best statements that I had read. It talks about how the schools "fairness" is really not fair, which I agree. It also makes some good point about the lockers and other problems that we are having in Spring Valley MSHS.
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Matt Thoms
10/29/2018 09:08:31 am
I think that #47 is the best structured deceleration, and has the best points. I think this because the other deceleration's had unimportant points that didn't really matter, while #47 had reasonable points about how students should be able to choose their own classes.
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Nolan Stans
10/29/2018 09:14:26 am
In my opinion #48 was the best because of the all information and reasoning it gave. It gave many ideas with strong reasoning behind and was really in depth in each topic.
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Kenzie McGrane
10/29/2018 10:05:41 am
#48 was my personal favorite! It drew me in right away and I wanted to read the rest of it. It gives specific examples to each point they have. They also gave some great detail as to why they are writing about each point.
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10/29/2018 10:20:08 am
Declaration # 48 is by far the most rebellious on e in my opinion. What I mean is it leaves most of the chooses to students to decide, in this way I agree with it. We have the right as people to make our own self chooses, also it by far has the most as close to flawless paper as possible. Three words to the other declaration - RUN ON SENTENCES- .
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Kylee
10/29/2018 11:26:27 am
I liked 47 because it seemed most relatable as well as it pointed out reasons the majority of students also dislike and would want to change.
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Andrea Hinzman
10/29/2018 11:26:56 am
I think that 47 is the best because is very persuasive and demanding is a polite tone. They have amazing use of words, and made it clear what needs to be changed and how to treat us high schoolers.
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max matthys
10/29/2018 11:33:38 am
#47 made a lot of sense to me because I fell the same way.
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Wyatt Wood
10/29/2018 11:37:00 am
#48 has good reasoning, clear points. I agree with all the points.
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Kyra Schilling
10/29/2018 12:19:09 pm
I agree strongly with Teen Declaration #48 because it has some really good points in it about school and how we can make the school better/our grades better.
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