I liked number 11 the best. I agree with a lot of what that person wants to implement in our school and things we need to change. Especially the food thing. There were a few points that really was just nonsense to me like the taking away noodles thats not really a big issue to be concerned about but everything else I thought was written well and the points given to back them up were well written.
I liked #13 the best as it had the most relatable arguments
I really liked number 11. I personally think that, while there were some that were very good and well done, number 11 is the best. They got on topics that a lot of students will agree with so it was easily relatable. All of the points made in this declaration were also explained very well.
I choose the 12th declaration for this section, it had good arguments and fought them in the right way. 14 was also in the running but the first sentance had a error. So thats a no go.
#13 was the best, it had the least grammatical errors, as well as the best ideas
12. Bad use of hyperbole and ew feminism
11. This one was the best. They had the really good formatting with the bold text, explained ideas well.
I agree the most with #13. It had arguments that I agree with the most with the least amount of errors that I saw. It could use some help with formatting paragraphs (using tabs to indicate different paragraphs) but other than that it was really good!
I agree most with number 13. I really like the idea of open campus lunch. They made some good points in their essay.
I thought number 11 and 13 were the best. They had the best arguments and I think everyone could easily agree with them.
I thought that number 12 was the best because, it made really strong points and brought up things that everyone agrees with, such as the dress code for girls.
Number 11 was the best out of all of them because I think a lot of the students would agree on the stuff she/he said.
I believe the number 11 was the best one because it had declarations that fit what I want changed.
I thought number 13 was the best because it had good arguments and i agreed with most of them.
The teen declaration that I agreed with the most was number 11. All of their arguments I agreed with 100%. Their points were very valid and I myself have discussed all of those with my family and friends.
Somethings need to change here.
I thought that number 13 was the best because it had the least amount of errors in it. Also, the arguments were very agreeable and most were within reason of an actual rule change. For every argument it used, there were valid reasons of why the rule should be changed and how it would play out.
It was a tough choice between #13 and #14, but in the end I choose #13 because it uses persuasive vocabulary better than #14.
I think that number 13 was the best teen declaration. This declaration had strong arguments that were all backed up with examples. All the points that were stated were things that for the most part I feel strongly about. They demanded different and more food options, and not having physical education be required. Overall, I think this declaration was well written and had good points.
I really enjoyed reading #12 because it had some better arguments than the others and it was something that wasn't better for just one group of teens it would benefit almost everyone. I agree with almost all of these arguments.
I agree with #13 the most because it uses detail and key points. It also had very few spelling errors.