Teen Declaration 25
Teen Declaration 26
Teen Declaration 27
Teen Declaration 28
Teen Declaration 29
Teen Declaration 30
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Please read the six declarations in this group. Then, leave a comment in which you state the NUMBER of the declaration you like best. Also, provide ONE reason why you chose this number as the best of this group.
Teen Declaration 25 Teen Declaration 26 Teen Declaration 27 Teen Declaration 28 Teen Declaration 29 Teen Declaration 30
9 Comments
anonymous
12/16/2016 08:55:42 am
#25, they were able to incorporate the beliefs of every high school students opinion on things, like getting up early in the morning and not being able to take classes that will help you with the career that you want when you´re older. With that they were able to still use an old fashion writing style.
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Brock Bune
12/16/2016 08:58:46 am
Teen Declaration 28 is the best. It's the only was that has a introduction that just pops right out to you. They get right to the point and they give reasons for what the adults did wrong and what us teens will do right.
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Alyssa Blackbird
12/16/2016 08:59:22 am
I think teen declaration 27 is the best because they grab the attention of the reader no matter who it is. They speak proper so that it doesn't sound like a sloppy teenager wrote it. But it also doesn't use big words where when a teenage reads it, they have no idea what most of the words mean. They have a well written introduction and conclusion and they get right to the point they are trying to make.
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Ally Lee
12/16/2016 09:10:00 am
I like #27 the best. They really drag you into the topics! But they aren't very descriptive! But still well written!!
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Madi Stone
12/16/2016 09:10:07 am
My favorite of the group was number 27. It comes across as someone who knows what they are talking about and knows exactly what points they want to get across to the reader.
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Dylan Bune
12/16/2016 09:14:03 am
number 30 says there points vary smoothly. I also agree with most of there points. There essay also looks the neatest
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Rocky Mccracken
12/16/2016 09:15:48 am
# 25 was a good one but there was some things i thought could be changed i think we should start school earlier because when you get a job your going to have to start early in the morning. #26 was the best they had points but they also had evidence to prove it.#27 it was bad i didn't like the points he made.#28 Had a lot of points i liked and it was every formal #29 wasn't bad but i thought i could use some more info
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Thomas Sandve
12/21/2016 08:13:27 am
I thought 26 was the best. It seems like the student put more effort into the essay than others in the group. I didn't agree with some of their requests, but they at least seemed somewhat thought out.
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Katy Schreiber
12/21/2016 08:22:14 am
I believe #26 is the best one all around. They have well written opinions with a lot of valid evidence to support their ideas. Their point about physical education credit is what really won my vote because that is what would benefit me the most personally because I am stuck taking a physical education class before the school day starts because in all of high school I have not been able to fit in enough credits.
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