Teen Declaration 37
Teen Declaration 38
Teen Declaration 39
Teen Declaration 40
Teen Declaration 41
Teen Declaration 42
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37 Comments
Sydney Dumond
12/10/2015 09:50:59 am
I choose number 39 because it has very good points. Especially the one about the weight room. I believe that is why I like this one so much.
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cruze hurlburt
12/10/2015 09:55:30 am
I really liked number 39. I loved the intro because it was sophisticated with that sound of when the actual declaration was made coming out of it. The intro was confusing at first but once was understood connected to me and spoke to my like jesus.
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Grace Hintz
12/10/2015 09:59:28 am
I would actually like to vote 37 even though it was my own for my favorite thing is sarcasm and all the others seemed too serious with theirs and I truly feel mine is worthy of he vote
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Katy Schreiber
12/10/2015 10:05:54 am
In this group of declarations I believe Teen Declaration 40 did the best job. They put a lot of detail into their arguments and it led to a very convincing declaration. I ended up agreeing with what they were demanding for their rights. It was the most well written and convincing of the group.
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Zachary Buxton
12/10/2015 10:16:35 am
Number 41 was the only one that caught my attention of this group. Surprisingly, I wasn't pulling my hair out while reading all the complains about nap times, leaving for lunch, and all the other annoying things. This declaration had some more reasonable ideas than all of the others ive read all hour (well except for me being biased and saying how mine over rules and is better than everyones). They had the phone ideas which just saying but being on Facebook or other social media will just lure you into stupidity and actually divert you away from making use of the 2 minutes you get to do homework. Overall, after my complaining and annoying ranting, this would again probably be the best ive read yet (once again besides me being biased about my own).
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Sean Borgerding
12/10/2015 10:17:48 am
Number 39 was my favorite of this group. I thought it made good points and had a couple original ones I have not read in the other declarations.
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D. Pierzinad
12/10/2015 10:23:35 am
I choose 39 for group 7 because the introduction was well written and it scoffed at the complaints of those our age.
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Tucker Hunter
12/10/2015 11:11:35 am
Number 41 was the best i agree with this person that we should be able to pick our own teachers and have personal days and there reasons are really good
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Tatum Huntress
12/10/2015 11:12:53 am
#40 had really good rights. They got right to the point and I agreed with each detailed one. It was convincing to me, since I agreed with almost all eight rights.
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Cooper Stevens
12/10/2015 11:13:48 am
39 the best one I think good intro and good points.
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Aaron Schneider
12/10/2015 11:16:30 am
#42 had the strongest opening in my opinion.
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Kassidy Molgard
12/10/2015 11:30:03 am
#39 very good points coming across and
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Morgan Fahrlander
12/10/2015 11:30:16 am
number 40 because I agreed with most of them.
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Levi Sands
12/10/2015 11:35:56 am
Number 42 was demanding and had reasonable points which is a good combination.
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Cody Anderson
12/10/2015 12:00:34 pm
# 42 because it was very demanding in its points and it had reasonable points to it.
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Sam Verges
12/10/2015 12:01:42 pm
I like number 39 because it has a good intro and I like how their are a lot of original points.
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Grace Anderson
12/10/2015 12:12:08 pm
40 was my favorite in this group. They had good rights and they got their point across smoothly.
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ALly
12/10/2015 12:12:17 pm
#42 because it had great reasoning to there points.
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Holly Anderson
12/10/2015 12:13:47 pm
#40 was really good. I agreed with most of their points and I liked their writing style. They might not have had the biggest vocabulary or fanciest words but it just really stood out to me. Especially their point about dress code. I really like how they did that paragraph.
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Sonja Zupancic
12/10/2015 12:14:52 pm
I like 40 the best because I agree with all of the points and it was very well written.
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Dylan
12/10/2015 12:20:38 pm
42 makes me want freedom that much more
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Alex Elverum
12/11/2015 06:36:47 am
#38 i think was the best it may need a bit of correcting but i think it was the best out of all of them.
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Tajiah
12/11/2015 06:42:44 am
Number 41 caught my attention because it was highlighted in some parts of it, and I agree with everything especially the music thing I like to listen to music when I am working on homework too.
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Jessica Christensen
12/11/2015 07:18:57 am
#39 was the best one out of this group because they had very good points with a variety of strong evidence and explanation. It was also a very convincing declaration.
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Braeden DuMond
12/11/2015 07:32:17 am
I thought that the best one was 39. I agreed with just about everything they said. They made very good points on their claims as well.
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Eric Eidem
12/11/2015 07:42:38 am
I believe that number 39 was very well made. I thought that the intro was actually intelligent and everything actually made sense.
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I think number 39 is really good! He or she did a very good introduction and conclusion and the points were very strong. Even if I don't agree with some of his/her points, I think he/she argue them really good, so that people can not contest. I don't agree with some points because I don't think that thinks would work good with all that freedom, but I think this declaration is still the best done. It was very clear.
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12/11/2015 08:17:09 am
I like number 39 out of group 7. This one was my favorite because I agree with almost all the things he or she is saying. I really like the one who talk about going to the bathroom when ever we feel like. Because one day we are asking to go to the bathroom and the next we are making decision that will change are lives. I also like the open lunch idea, the speed limit, and the sixty minutes of recess. Good job to whoever this is!!
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Audrey Bigaouette
12/11/2015 08:21:14 am
I thought number 39 was written well and had sufficient evidence to back the claims made in the original arguments.
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Cole Pelzel
12/11/2015 08:24:15 am
I think 39 had some of the best points because we are practically adults and we should have some basic rights at school.
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Jenn Hayes
12/11/2015 09:04:28 am
I feel like #37 did the best job. I appreciate that this one was not overly sassy which I liked. This is a declaration not a Twitter post. I liked the some-what realistic ideas yet fun. This person addressed issues such as girls' shorts and that if no one wore pants it wouldn't be a problem. I liked the idea of eliminating homework with a more conversational and interacting way of learning. Plus, I love my selfies like any other teenager. This is written by a teenager for teenagers so these all make sense and work.
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Jacqueline Dieckman
12/11/2015 09:05:42 am
I liked number 37 the best. It was relatable to the common teenager and supplied a sufficient amount of evidence for its arguments. The author also incorporated a some humorous points with a touch of sass, which is always makes it more fun to read. The points that they made were not always clear and it would of been better if they had bluntly stated what their objectives were.
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Tyler Konobeck
12/11/2015 12:11:38 pm
I chose 39. I really liked the idea of having juice as water fountains but i think we should have both one water on the side and one juice on the side. I think we shouldn't have to pay for it if we do it has to be like 5$ for the whole year.
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Jaydon Nyeggen
12/11/2015 12:20:46 pm
I liked number 39 the best because it had a good intro and it had a lot of good solutions to teens everyday problems.
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Austin Lansning
12/11/2015 12:28:48 pm
I think that #38 was the best i mostly agreed with the authors number 6 point. And they had some really good points to make kids wanna come to school more often.
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Tessa Cipriano
12/11/2015 12:31:32 pm
I think I liked #40 the best. This declaration provided a lot of relatable ideas and I really appreciated the freedom of expression section. I liked the specific and real examples that they gave.
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Jackson Webster
12/15/2015 07:31:04 am
I liked 39 the best because it explained how we as teenagers are practically adults, and should have some rights.
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