Teen Declaration 31
Teen Declaration 32
Teen Declaration 33
Teen Declaration 34
Teen Declaration 35
Teen Declaration 36
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33 Comments
Sydney Dumond
12/10/2015 09:45:24 am
I liked number 36 the best because it has a lot of good options and many cool ideas as to more freedom for students.
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Katy Schreiber
12/10/2015 09:48:34 am
I believe that the most well done teen declaration of this group is Teen Declaration 35. It did a good job listing the rights and responsibilities while at the same time being very convincing. I also enjoyed that statistics and evidence were used to help argue their rights.
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Grace Hintz
12/10/2015 09:50:49 am
I will cast my vote for 33 for they have some good view points and very good rights
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Cruze Hurlburt
12/10/2015 09:53:02 am
I enjoyed number 34 because of the honesty and the sarcasm. It started off with talking about not liking this topic and how they are already alright with the laws. I give them props for standing up for them selves and being funny while doing it.
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Zachary Buxton
12/10/2015 10:07:40 am
I'd have to say number 35 was quite nice to say the least. They had grand ideas and weren't too bad with explaining. The ideas were relatively similar to those of mine. However, for the 5th time, I still say phones are waste to have in school. We have books for sources and phones during class are just a waste of time. If absolutely need to look something up that doesn't happen to be in class, then walk 5 feet away to a computer, not that hard is it?
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Sean Borgerding
12/10/2015 10:11:44 am
My favorite was #36. I like how the good points were explained and was convincing that we should get those rights.
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Allora Windsor
12/10/2015 10:13:46 am
#33 is great! super fantasic points!
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Tatum Huntress
12/10/2015 11:09:48 am
#35 was the best one. It was very convincing, while still meeting the responsibilities allowed for each right. It had great stats for each right.
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Aaron Schneider
12/10/2015 11:11:20 am
#32 is good it has a good opening and has some good rights with a few that sounded funny.
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Morgan Fahrlander
12/10/2015 11:27:11 am
#33 is the bomb because of the bomb declarations.
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Kassidy Molgard
12/10/2015 11:27:17 am
#36 was he best very well words used and the points were well written, agree with the rights
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Levi Sands
12/10/2015 11:29:23 am
Number 31 had good points and used good language like the future of the people.
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Conner Simon
12/10/2015 11:34:58 am
Number thirty six was the best in my mind. It had many good and thoughtful ideas, and I think most teens would agree upon. Therefore this would be my choice out of this group.
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Cody Anderson
12/10/2015 11:58:31 am
# 36 because it caught my eye with the font style and it did make good points
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Holly Anderson
12/10/2015 12:03:58 pm
#33 was my favorite. I laughed a lot and it was enjoyable to read. It just was my favorite.
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Grace Anderson
12/10/2015 12:04:37 pm
33 was my pick for this group. They had very good points and their explanations made me laugh.
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Dylan
12/10/2015 12:18:40 pm
31 makes excellent points backed up with amazing evidence
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Sonja Zupancic
12/10/2015 12:24:31 pm
I like 32 the best because crayons are life.
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Emily Roesler
12/10/2015 12:52:47 pm
I liked number 36. It has a nice title font and was well written.
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Jack Walkky
12/11/2015 06:53:42 am
Number 36 was the best. It was the best because it made great points and good evidence for each one of these points.
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Tyler Leach
12/11/2015 06:54:25 am
My favorite was #36 because it made a lot of points that I would also want to change and it gave good ways to have these changes made without upsetting a lot of others.
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Ali Schneider
12/11/2015 07:20:12 am
i liked #36 because it has a lot of points that i want to be changed too.
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Nathan Rabanus
12/11/2015 07:32:08 am
My favorite one is number 36, because it actually can work by holding students accoutable for their actions.
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Henry Bellin
12/11/2015 07:32:32 am
#36, because they complained about things when no one else would.
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Lance McMurrin
12/11/2015 07:37:17 am
I think that #31 was the best because it had amazing points and I felt motivated to stand up for my rights.
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Josh Hannack
12/11/2015 07:38:09 am
I like number 35 because it was very well written and had some good ideas. They also have good evidence
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Hannah Siverling
12/11/2015 07:58:38 am
I enjoyed number 32, because of IV; it gives the students the right to catnap. No one words it like the way this writer did, and it made me laugh.
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Nadia Lamberta
12/11/2015 08:00:16 am
I like number 32 the best because we all deserve to take naps
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Jordan Walkky
12/11/2015 08:51:27 am
#36 was the best declaration because the owner stated their option in a neat lay-out with great support. They also had a funny, sassy aspect to their piece which I enjoyed! :)
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Rachel Franzen
12/11/2015 08:51:56 am
Number 36 was the best because it gave off a lot of support on why those certain things should be changed, but was not boring with it. It made me laugh throughout the whole thing.
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Devan Morgan
12/11/2015 12:07:43 pm
Number 36 was the best because they brought up a lot of things that no body else would say and it made a lot of points that I would change too.
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Story East
12/11/2015 12:11:49 pm
I cast my vote for number 33. They have good points when it comes to work leaves,classes that would help us out in the future, and also a coffee machine. And I love coffee, so I have a slight bias towards number 33. Most of the Teen Declarations in Group 6 were similar and had the same key points, it's not hard to see what teens want and don't want from school.
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Julian Davis
12/11/2015 12:29:21 pm
Number 36 was my overall favorite. It was constructed very well, and the points were very well thought out. They were very reasonable, and were all backed with very good explanations and examples. The introduction was done very well, and the conclusion was spot on, and gave me something to remember. Some great metaphors were used, and the use of vocabulary was nice as well. Awesome job!
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