Teen Declaration 19
Teen Declaration 20
Teen Declaration 21
Teen Declaration 22
Teen Declaration 23
Teen Declaration 24
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37 Comments
Cruze hurlburt
12/10/2015 09:46:57 am
Number 19 won this one because of how stern and how straight forward they were with their arguments. The first to words got me thinking and excited to read this one. "injustice stings" This is a good way to spark my attention by stating a true fact right away. Then it made me think of what injustice and so on.
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Allora Windsor
12/10/2015 09:51:14 am
#19. Great uses of language and points.
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Emily Roesler
12/10/2015 09:54:20 am
I vote for teen declaration number 19 because they used a lot of complex words to make the declaration seem more serious rather than if they would have just used simple common words.
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Sean Borgerding
12/10/2015 09:55:39 am
My favorite is #20. It was my favorite because their points were the best along with the explanation and responsibilities of it.
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Zachary Buxton
12/10/2015 09:57:02 am
From reading (well at least skimming) through all the declarations within this group I say by far the best is 23. They had the most reasonable suggestions, but still had things I really didn't approve of. One for which is the "phone as a source" idea. Okay people, they were dismissed due to the excuses of using them as a source in the first place. There are plenty more of resources, ever heard of books before? Yeah I didn't think so.
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Falyn McCracken
12/10/2015 10:05:40 am
I feel like number 19 is the best choice because the rights are the most creative I have seen yet.
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Savanna Klinger
12/10/2015 10:06:01 am
#19 very well done and interesting introduction and conclusion. Good use of imagery and analogies.
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Sierra
12/10/2015 10:10:33 am
I think that #20 did a really nice job. Was very well written and I agree with each of the rights.
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Maggie Fahrlander
12/10/2015 10:16:00 am
Number 19 is the best declaration because they address some very important topics and they worded their declaration very nicely.
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Sera Greifzu
12/10/2015 10:17:38 am
I liked #19 because they made some very clear points and justified why they said them.
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Andrea Stockwell
12/10/2015 10:20:12 am
Number 23 is the best declaration because they say some very important's points throughout the declaration.
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Levi Sands
12/10/2015 11:10:48 am
Number 20 is the best because it states good topics and explains the rights and the responsibilities well.
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Grace Larson
12/10/2015 11:19:44 am
Number 20 was very good. It was well written and had very good points and wasn't too long or boring.
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Morgan Fahrlander
12/10/2015 11:20:01 am
Number 19 was very interesting.
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Kassidy Molgard
12/10/2015 11:22:31 am
#19 they made the points clear on what they wanted to say
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Tatum Huntress
12/10/2015 11:26:31 am
I liked #21. I agreed with all of their rights. They were really convincing. Some of their responsibilities I didn't agree with but they made sense.
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Seth Schlegel
12/10/2015 11:27:24 am
I liked 23, it was well thought out and made me feel involved.
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Cody Anderson
12/10/2015 11:53:51 am
#19 because it had a lot of good points and it they backed it up.
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Alex Bawek
12/10/2015 12:00:45 pm
I vote for number 19 because they had the best choice of words, it was well written, and they stated points that were different than a lot of the ones I'd already seen.
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ALly
12/10/2015 12:06:16 pm
#20. The made the points clear on what they wanted!
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Dylan
12/10/2015 12:11:54 pm
22 because they made the best points and reasoning to back it up
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Madi Stone
12/10/2015 12:25:43 pm
I loved number 19 since a lot of the points applied to me or i agreed with it.
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Zack Williams
12/11/2015 06:51:04 am
Of all of the declarations that I read I believe that #19 is the best because its has good points and a good point of view for the reader.
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Breanna Loyas
12/11/2015 06:53:14 am
I think that #19 was the best. It uses very descriptive sentences and I think that all of their arguments were very strong.
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Kalley Rustad
12/11/2015 07:19:09 am
I think that #21 was the best. Their arguments were very strong, and very appealing. Their sentences are also very descriptive and their words are used very well together.
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Shelby Burton
12/11/2015 07:21:35 am
I really like #19 because the stated opinion of this declaration is straight to the point and I agree with every argument made. I like how they stay on topic and make sure to get the argument across right away.
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Kate Franzen
12/11/2015 07:33:48 am
I think that #19 is the best one out of the six declarations. It had very good points and a lot of details to support it. Most of the points were very interesting. It also had a good introduction that kept me reading.
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Gabe Larson
12/11/2015 07:37:16 am
I think that 19 was the best by far because it had lots of good points and had lots of evidence to back it up, and was structured really well.
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Chase Mattison
12/11/2015 08:05:17 am
I vote for number 22. All the other ones that I read had ridiculous and/or childish demands. These were actually practical and thought out.
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Josh Kulenkamp
12/11/2015 08:07:09 am
#22; This teen declaration is by far the best. It has the most knowledgeable about their topics and, has the most realistic expectations with respectable balances.
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Savannah Mattison
12/11/2015 08:31:05 am
I thought that 19 was the best out of Group 4. The format was really easy on the eyes. The introduction used the word "need" a lot so it made the audience start to agree and think that they "need" change. I don't agree with the women getting time off though. That's not what it's going to be like in the "real world". If you want to be treated like an adult, you need to toughen up and deal with what life hands you.
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Rachel Coyne
12/11/2015 08:50:16 am
I believe that number 19 is a clear winner in this group. The grammar and words used are very professional and really make this declaration stand out. The points presented by the author are all very reasonable and seem like they are very well thought out.
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Nick Kalmes
12/11/2015 08:50:49 am
I believe that number 19 was the best declaration. It made valuable points that weren't outrageous. They also were able to support their demands. Although this was the best one, I think that they tried a little too hard to use big and complex words.
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sam
12/11/2015 12:18:58 pm
i like #19 because they stated a lot of things I have recently started thinking about like within this week
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Nathan Hannack
12/11/2015 12:26:39 pm
23 was good but it had a very short intro and conclusion. Also they may want to check the facts about probationary licences rules about night driving, because driving to work, school, church, or home is legal at anytime, and emergencies can be excused too. (Thank Mr. Ottman for that one)
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Nathan Hannack
12/11/2015 12:30:51 pm
24 has a very good point about students running to be on the school board, and athletic fees, but putting in numbers to see how many "demands" the declaration has would be a great idea.
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Blake Johnson
12/11/2015 12:32:09 pm
Number 24 was confusing. Some of the statements were logical and clearly stated, others seemed to either be shallow or meant to make fun of illogical demands of other students. For example, the lowering college cost point had very little backing. You cannot just demand that we change something like that without stating a plan. Maybe look at why college prices are so high, maybe it is the lack of competition out government has created, the focus should be deeper and concentrate on the underlying issue, not just simply asking for something. Other issues like teenagers having a representation in our power system were addressed well and have backing to them.
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