Teen Declaration 13
Teen Declaration 14
Teen Declaration 15
Teen Declaration 16
Teen Declaration 17
Teen Declaration 18
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44 Comments
cruze hurlburt
12/10/2015 09:43:39 am
Declaration 14 one this group due to how well it was organized and how well they stated change. They wanted change and how they portrayed that really made it jump off the page at me.
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Sean Borgerding
12/10/2015 09:45:59 am
My favorite was #16. I liked the points that it made and then how it used sarcasm and over exaggeration of the points. It made it enjoyable to read also.
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Zachary Buxton
12/10/2015 09:46:30 am
Number 13 was by far the best. they had fair changes with just as fair compensations. All of the topics brought up made sense, were fair, and overall understandable. If this were a real life scenario this one would definitely get picked out of everyones in the world. Gee, I really wonder who made something this incredible at such a young age!!!!!
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Emily Roesler
12/10/2015 09:50:49 am
I am voting for teen declaration number 13 because even though it did not have all 8 rights included, each right that was listed was very different from what the majority of the other rights in everyone else's declarations.
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Maggie Fahrlander
12/10/2015 09:58:26 am
I think 17 was the best declaration because they had very good concessions for their rights.
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Savanna Klinger
12/10/2015 10:00:33 am
#16 Proved some very well point and gave good explanations while keeping things lively and not dull and boring.
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Falyn McCracken
12/10/2015 10:00:45 am
I loved #16. It was very comical and humorus.
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Andrea Stockwell
12/10/2015 10:12:19 am
My favorite is Declaration 18. Their first paragraph made me have more interest in what they were going to say. I totally agree with all of their points and the way they explained them thoroughly.
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Sydney Dumond
12/10/2015 10:17:24 am
I vote for 16 because it was funny and I liked the fact they added more time to in between classes..
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Zach Boisen
12/10/2015 10:19:14 am
#16 was the best. Their approach to writing this was different but yet very much effective. Their rhetorical questions and hyperboles they used were effective and funny.
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D. Pierzina
12/10/2015 10:20:51 am
I choose 16 for group 3 because it is explained thoroughly and i agree with the points. It was also entertaining.
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Grace Larson
12/10/2015 11:15:43 am
I really liked number 16. It was very funny and I did not get bored with it. They use good examples too.
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Tucker Hunter
12/10/2015 11:16:57 am
16 really grabbed my attention when I noticed that they put some funny examples into there declaration.
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Morgan Fahrlander
12/10/2015 11:17:56 am
18 looks nice so my vote is for 18.
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Kassidy Molgard
12/10/2015 11:19:15 am
#16 it was explaining thoroughly and all the points they're making were right on. And I found it entertaining.
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Tatum Huntress
12/10/2015 11:23:49 am
#16 was the best one. It was really convincing while being humorous. It was also really detailed in each right.
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Seth Schlegel
12/10/2015 11:24:27 am
I choose 16. Not much else needed it was funny!! Duh
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Tianna Cebulla
12/10/2015 11:31:06 am
I really liked number 16. I agreed with the points it made and I like how the person had sarcasm and over exaggeration in it.
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Thomas Sandve
12/10/2015 11:32:55 am
I chose number 16 because it was something different. It used a lot of personal examples, so students may relate to it better than the other papers.
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Zach Maier
12/10/2015 11:39:34 am
Number 16 was the best because they argued their points very well and used word choice very effectively. They also incorporated humor which added to the piece.
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Ally
12/10/2015 12:03:26 pm
#16, they really made you keep on reading. And it was really funny!
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Dylan
12/10/2015 12:04:16 pm
17 is the best because they make there points vary sharply and i would like a vending machine
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Cody Anderson
12/10/2015 12:09:19 pm
#16 because it was was funny, it was different, it was not boring.
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Hunter Robertson
12/10/2015 12:20:24 pm
I like number 16 because she put humor into it and not alot did that.
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Madi Stone
12/10/2015 12:21:10 pm
I loved number 16, it is funny, and expresses how we are treated all in one!
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Holly Anderson
12/10/2015 12:23:00 pm
I choose #16 because they make it really interesting. Their writing style made me want to keep reading.
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Grace Anderson
12/10/2015 12:25:54 pm
I loved 16! It was so funny and it was fun to read.
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12/10/2015 12:29:22 pm
I like number 16 because it is sarcastic and makes fun of everything.
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Calvin Kotval
12/11/2015 06:45:56 am
16 was an obvious winner! The way the writer started out each paragraph with a funny scenario to prove their point was amazing. To be honest, all the other ones made me want to take a nap but this one was so interesting I don't think I even blinked!
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Cole Flick
12/11/2015 06:50:45 am
I like #16 it had very good points. And I thought it was fun to read.
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Naomi Thatcher
12/11/2015 06:51:45 am
If I had to pick one just because it was down right Hilarious it would be #16, but if I had to pick one because I agreed with it the most that would #14.
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Christa
12/11/2015 07:21:08 am
#15 was da bomb because it was short and to the point. I agree with most of their points also.
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Jordan Ninneman
12/11/2015 07:21:17 am
I am voting for number 15. I like number 15 because they know what they think should be done and was right to the point. Most of their ideas were new and just good ideas.
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Carter Merth
12/11/2015 07:37:36 am
I liked #16 the best. I thought that it was funny, and it was just all out the best one. I don't think that they could be any more entertaining to read along with all the humor.
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Zip Bosshart
12/11/2015 07:42:56 am
Number 16 was the best. It was super funny and brought up very good points in the process.
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Gina Schneider
12/11/2015 08:11:00 am
I pick #16 because even tho it is funny, it is also true. The details were in depth, and very convincing towards me. When someone passes away and you go to the funeral, it gets counted as any other day as being gone. If you have a family emergency and you have to be out of school it still gets count and if it is a long time out of school you could get marked for being truant. The information that was give was amazing. It was very clear on what you wanted to be done with our school.
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Maddie Lee
12/11/2015 08:13:32 am
Declaration 16 was my favorite because of the way it is written and because of the use of sarcasm made it entertaining to read.
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Maria Reusch
12/11/2015 08:15:35 am
Honestly, 17 would be the best. I know a lot of people would most likely vote for 16 because it uses plenty of sarcasm in there, which is after all what a lot of teens have today, but if you actually look at what 17 has to offer, you would find it would make much more sense. Its very reasonable and has good points that MAKE sense and would actually help us in the long run.
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Esther Gland
12/11/2015 08:57:29 am
I liked number 16. It was, in my opinion, the most well written. It was SO SASSY! Kudos to whoever wrote this. It was phenomenal and the issues addressed were actually really relevant.
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Becky Wilson
12/11/2015 09:03:12 am
Alright, I did enjoy number 16 the most. It was sarcastic and the points were pretty well-made. But, when it comes down to which one was the most ethical and would actually help us out, it was number 17. It made really good points that would aid us even more in life.
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Michael Laffin
12/11/2015 12:23:26 pm
I especially enjoyed number 16. The issues that were described in the writing were not much different from any other pieces, but the humor in the text really made it stand out. It appeared to be really thought out, keeping the reader fully engaged the entire time. There was a great use of sarcasm and exaggeration that helped convey the points over.
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Kayla Borup
12/11/2015 12:24:58 pm
I really liked 17, it was practical and intriguing.
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Tanner bowell
12/11/2015 12:27:37 pm
I enjoyed 16 the best because It had good points and also had a lot of humor to it.
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Madelyn Schmidt
12/11/2015 12:29:35 pm
I am voting for #16. Because it was funny and made some great points. I also loved the sarcasm. Some of my favorite points were to be able to see R rated movies, and having kids wear funny costumes instead of giving them detention. I totally agree!!
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