Teen Declaration 7
Teen Declaration 8
Teen Declaration 9
Teen Declaration 10
Teen Declaration 11
Teen Declaration 12
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Teen Declaration 7 Teen Declaration 8 Teen Declaration 9 Teen Declaration 10 Teen Declaration 11 Teen Declaration 12
40 Comments
Cruze Hurlburt
12/10/2015 09:40:31 am
Number 8 was the better of them merely because of how strong the introduction was. It made me think really hard and that hooked me into the rest of the paper. This intro was better than the others as well.
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Emily Roesler
12/10/2015 09:44:55 am
I vote for teen declaration number 7 because each of their points or rights are clear and easy to find. Their explanations as to why each right is beneficial makes sense and is logical.
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Allora Windsor
12/10/2015 09:45:43 am
#8 stand out to me. The points are good.
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Maggie Fahrlander
12/10/2015 09:49:23 am
I think that number 12 is the best because it is worded very well and I agree with all of the points brought up in this declaration.
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Zach Boisen
12/10/2015 09:56:07 am
#12 was my favorite. It was the best one of group 2. The metaphor's and other rhetorical techniques that were used were very effective and pretty funny. Us singing with the birds and the cooks spitting our lunches on our trays was really funny. The 8 points made were also very similar to my own so I could relate and they did a great job explaining why they wanted the rights.
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Falyn McCracken
12/10/2015 09:56:24 am
I liked #9 the best because I feel that the rights stated would be the most benefical to teens.
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Sydney Dumond
12/10/2015 10:06:58 am
I choose number 7 because it says we get two personal days off of school just because.
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Andrea Stockwell
12/10/2015 10:07:33 am
Declaration 12 is my top choice out of group 2. This person really thought it threw what their points were, and how much time to put into each point.
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D. Pierzina
12/10/2015 10:14:11 am
I choose 11 for group 2 because its into is written professionally. It addresses school but refers to things it affects. It made irrefutable points and was intelligently stated.
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Whitney Hartung
12/10/2015 10:16:17 am
I liked number 8 the most because of the way it really related to what a lot of us teens feel. I especially liked their right about teens being able to choose who is in their class because high school can be really stressful and just having people who you are most comfortable with can help relieve a lot of the stress caused by school.
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Patrick Cipriano
12/10/2015 10:17:03 am
Number 12 was the best one in this group. Number 12 was the best one in this group because it appeals to all teens.The author really reached out to the needs of teens, and how we feel. This one also made teens feel united by using "we" repetitively through out the declaration. All of the points of this declaration were very strong and yet were short enough not to bore.
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Grace Larson
12/10/2015 11:10:12 am
I really liked number 12 it had some good points and I agreed with them. I did not get bored reading it either.
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Seth Schlegel
12/10/2015 11:15:28 am
I think #12 was the best one because the author got to the point and made me feel apart of the declaration.
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Morgan Fahrlander
12/10/2015 11:16:43 am
12 stood out the most. Very nice.
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Courtney Peterson
12/10/2015 11:19:34 am
Number 12 is my favorite in group 2. This person did very well. Their intro caught my attention right away.
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Tatum Huntress
12/10/2015 11:21:02 am
#12 was the best one. It used great points, and had very detailed rights. They also mixed into some humor in this declaration which made it enjoyable to read.
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Thomas Sandve
12/10/2015 11:25:46 am
Number 7 was the best in this group. It was well written and did a good job of backing up its points.
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Brett Fogarty
12/10/2015 11:25:54 am
I felt that 12 was the best because they started off with one of the best introductions, which is what catches the readers eye.
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Aaron Schneider
12/10/2015 11:33:38 am
#12 was very well put together with several good points.
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Zach Maier
12/10/2015 11:34:25 am
Number 12 was the best one because they had really good rights with even better evidence. They explained what they were thinking very clearly and got the point across so overall a nice job.
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Kassidy Molgard
12/10/2015 11:37:07 am
#12 very well written points and was humor in it which made it fun to read
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Dylan Bune
12/10/2015 11:58:31 am
12 it uses a lot of good evidence and made there point clearly
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Ally
12/10/2015 12:00:04 pm
#12 because they ask a lot of questions to make you keep reading and they ask good questions. Then also they have very good responses to why they feel that way.
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Cody Anderson
12/10/2015 12:08:16 pm
#8 because it had some really good points.
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Madi Stone
12/10/2015 12:16:03 pm
I liked number 12 the most since the others all sounded so similar. 12 also used information that actually caught my attention.
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Kaitlin McGrane
12/10/2015 12:17:25 pm
I like #12 the best. It had the best points and it didnt get boring.
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Kallie Stone
12/11/2015 06:48:10 am
The one declaration that stood out to me the most was #12. I like #12 because it described each point in great detail.The author of this declaration also used the word "we" a lot in order to have the reader feel included. The humor in this declaration also helps keep the reader interested in the piece.
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Gabby Stevens
12/11/2015 06:54:36 am
I like #12 the most because I can relate to it and it has very well written points and all the others sounded very similar. This one caught my attention and had a little humor in it as well.
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isaiah eitrem
12/11/2015 07:15:36 am
group #1....number 3 is the best, it has good ideas.
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12/11/2015 07:35:30 am
My favorite is #10. It has quite a few logical out-of-the-box points, and I truly appreciated the the resources page.
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12/11/2015 07:40:16 am
I chose declaration 10 because their requests were somewhat realistic (minus a couple) but was much more realistic than the other ones I had read. The requests were ones I could relate to and they were worded and written quite well.
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Karley Schilling
12/11/2015 07:40:57 am
I liked number 12 because I thought it was very specific and it was very well written.
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Maddie Jacobson
12/11/2015 07:42:05 am
I like number 12 the most because it has a lot of good points and can relate to a lot of teens lives. I believe if we made these changes teens wouldn't be as stressed as we are now.
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Ryan Berg
12/11/2015 08:03:14 am
I vote for number 8. Number 8 is written well and making valid statements, it is a powerful declaration with a want for authority.
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Ethan Hofacker
12/11/2015 08:19:44 am
#12 seemed the most professionally written and went into the most depth with what they wanted for the teens. Also it was easily agreeable
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Abbey Graham
12/11/2015 08:31:28 am
I think that number 10 has some good points. It's pretty well written, and is well thought out. The math and points raised seem legit and I agree with pretty much every deceleration.
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Jacob Rielly
12/11/2015 09:05:03 am
Many of the Declarations in group two had unreasonable requests; however, I thought that number seven had the least. Each request was also backed up with an agreeable argument. Declaration number seven is the best in group two.
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12/11/2015 09:08:36 am
Even though I may not believe several of the points in the declaration are worth complaining about, I chose declaration #7. I appreciated the comparison of school lunch to cardboard, and I personally agree with the point about being able to have more class options. Most of the points contained acceptable explanation as to why teens should gain the stated right.
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alex johnson
12/11/2015 12:10:54 pm
I personally think all of them made very good and valid points nut number 7 deserves the title of being one of the best ones because they clearly stated what point they wanted to get across without rambling. Every point they made was completely true.
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Haley Graham
12/11/2015 12:25:56 pm
I really liked #7, because of how it was worded and how they provided solutions to some of the problems that might come up if we, say, eat off campus, or get into older rated movie. They provided great evidence and stated ground rules for each.
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