Teen Declaration 1
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Teen Declaration 3
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Teen Declaration 5
Teen Declaration 6
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Click on the links to view teen declarations in this group. After reading all in this group, make a comment with your first and last name, your choice of best declaration within this group, and one reason why you think it is the best.
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41 Comments
Cruze Hurlburt
12/10/2015 09:37:32 am
The sixth one was the best because the arguments where very strong and most of all I was very intrigued by the vocabulary that was used and how strong it was.
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Allora Windsor
12/10/2015 09:43:30 am
#5, because the points and the first paragraph stand out.
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Falyn McCracken
12/10/2015 09:45:36 am
I liked #3 the best out of the group because the rights have the most logical compensation.
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Patrick Cipriano
12/10/2015 09:49:14 am
Number 1 was the best in this group. Number 1 gave the clearest and most in depth paragraphs as to why we deserve these demands. Many of the declarations in this group would start saying "I" and giving personal situations. I felt like this made the declaration less of a demand and more of a question. Using the word I seemed to give the declaration more of a personal appeal, rather than professional. Number 1 was one of the few that did not do this, and was the most complete in their explanations.
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Andrea Stockwell
12/10/2015 09:56:12 am
My number one choice would be declaration 5. All the points throughout the declaration make sense, we do want to make our own choices. This person structured their declarations so well and organized.
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Sydney Dumond
12/10/2015 10:04:02 am
I choose number 3 because I like that they used the right to get to class whenever.
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Whitney Hartung
12/10/2015 10:06:00 am
Number 5 was the declaration I liked the most out of this group because the writer thoroughly backed up their rights and made sure everything was written very clearly.
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D. Pierzina
12/10/2015 10:08:05 am
I chose 2 for group one because it makes points that i agree on, it wasn't done with anger but drive. It was well written and persuasive.
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Tucker
12/10/2015 11:05:28 am
i like number 5 the best because the reasons are very good
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Morgan Fahrlander
12/10/2015 11:12:20 am
Number 6 was the best because of the very strong points.
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Seth Schlegel
12/10/2015 11:13:26 am
I think #6 was the best because it made a lot of sense generally and it had really good vocabulary.
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Zach Maier
12/10/2015 11:17:08 am
Number 5 was the best because they backed up their points and they had good points. They used word choice very well and had the least grammatical errors of the group.
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Tatum Huntress
12/10/2015 11:18:05 am
#5 was the best declaration. They thoroughly explained their rights and they were really convincing to me.
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Thomas Sandve
12/10/2015 11:20:28 am
I think number 5 was the best. It was pretty well written and had a demanding tone.
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Aaron Schneider
12/10/2015 11:28:08 am
Of this group #5 had a very ingenious opening and great points.
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Craig Wyss
12/10/2015 11:29:03 am
I think that #1 was the best as its points were simple and short as well as too the point and avoided rambling on about uneeded information
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Courtney Peterson
12/10/2015 11:32:28 am
I like #3 in this group. They had very good word choice. Everything in their declaration seemed reasonable.
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Kassidy Molgard
12/10/2015 11:34:04 am
#5 very well written and good points coming across
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ALly
12/10/2015 11:55:16 am
#5 is the best on my opinion and it has good points to back up his or her opinion
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Cody Anderson
12/10/2015 12:06:38 pm
#5 because it was good and had a strong opening.
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Madi Stone
12/10/2015 12:07:54 pm
I liked number 6 the best because it has some really different and great points.
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Sam Verges
12/10/2015 12:14:40 pm
I like number 5 the most because it has the best points and is written good.
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Brock Bune
12/10/2015 12:15:25 pm
I chose #3 because I agree the most with these rights then all the others. I like how they mention how we are the future and that time is now for us to be treated equally among men and women.
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Dylan
12/10/2015 12:22:16 pm
5 was vary in your face and demanding liked it
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Hannah
12/11/2015 06:32:14 am
I liked number 6. I thought there was good points and the writer was able to use good points to why we should be able to pick our own classes.
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Dakota .J. Elsnepeter
12/11/2015 06:39:27 am
#5 was the best in my opinion because it would lead to having less stress on us then some of the other arguments.
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henry
12/11/2015 06:43:08 am
I think that 2 was the best it had the most logical points and it has many ideas that i support
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Hannah
12/11/2015 06:52:15 am
I really liked number 6. There was good points in it and they had good points.
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Logan Newton
12/11/2015 07:19:20 am
#3 is the best one that i choose. This one has a really strong belief in what they feel they deserve and have strong points to back up there reasoning. There reasoning's are very reasonable and persuasive.
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12/11/2015 08:16:25 am
I thought number six was well written the 2nd and 4th clams were a bit unclear to me.
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Erin S.
12/11/2015 08:18:28 am
I think that number 6 was the best. It definitely had the strongest and most reasonable points. There weren't any "I" statements it was all about "we", the teenager group as a whole and what "we" want not what "I" want.
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Austen Mason
12/11/2015 08:20:14 am
I decided that i like the number 3 because it is just like college to where you can go to class whenever you want to.
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Jacob Losert
12/11/2015 08:20:50 am
I think that #5 was the best because the points made the most sense and were the most relate able
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Alessandro Oggioni
12/11/2015 08:21:19 am
group 1, number 5.
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Becky Fesenmaier
12/11/2015 08:45:14 am
I liked #5 the best mainly because of their arguments and how professional it sounded. It was very relateable and easy to understand while getting the point across. It shows reasonable wants of the teens.
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Jack Hannack
12/11/2015 08:48:20 am
Number 5 is the best in this group because it has depth however it is not repetitive but rather clear and concise. I like how this declaration sounded confident but was not ignorant or disrespectful.
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Grace Hintz
12/11/2015 12:13:41 pm
I must cast my vote for number 6 for it seemed to have the best veiwpoints and i really like the writing style
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Craigen Anderson
12/11/2015 12:16:52 pm
I have to say that #5 was the best with #1 being a close second because though they both had clear ideas that would fit into the teenage society I feel that #5 explained their point better and had better voice in their writing.
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Alex Moe
12/11/2015 12:21:38 pm
I liked #4 because the it had logic and really related to my problems. Especially paragraph number 4.
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Carley Laffin
12/11/2015 12:22:53 pm
I think that number 1 was the best teen declaration in this group. It had a very strong introduction and made good points. The points were reasonable and clear.
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Jenna
12/14/2015 06:40:30 pm
I feel number one was the best teen declaration. It gave strong arguments that I feel most teens would agree with. They made very clear, strong points that were very easy to follow.
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